Yay, beat my target for the day again! Look at that word count rise. And I finally wrote my angry mob scene! I admit it didn't turn out quite how I envisioned - there's very often a big gap between what I see in my head and what I can convey on the paper - but I'm happy with it for a first draft.
Now I've got the emotional aftermath and the big "doorway of no return scene." Because the angry mob scene didn't pan out exactly how I planned in terms of Ayla and Shannon being together, this next bit probably isn't going to go quite how I planned either, unless I write in a massive coincidental reunion, which seems like cheating... One to sleep on, I think.
33008 / 70000 words. 47% done!
Now I've got the emotional aftermath and the big "doorway of no return scene." Because the angry mob scene didn't pan out exactly how I planned in terms of Ayla and Shannon being together, this next bit probably isn't going to go quite how I planned either, unless I write in a massive coincidental reunion, which seems like cheating... One to sleep on, I think.
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