I'm really not happy with the first chapter, especially, and am thinking of ways to give it a bit more bang, most of which...
This is where I'm at. I'm willing to scrap what I've got, but I'm stuck at trying to find a way to give the intro enough bang while still containing at least one element that I consider mandatory.
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ninetydegrees
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on 2010-06-18 04:41 am (UTC)This is where I'm at. I'm willing to scrap what I've got, but I'm stuck at trying to find a way to give the intro enough bang while still containing at least one element that I consider mandatory.
*sigh*