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2011-06-25 01:43 am (UTC)
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Was the Author trying to say that while at his Sister's, he met another Female? If so, you're right. Lack of information is key.
As a potential writer, we need to remember that if we don't put/paint the picture we see, ito words, the Reader ain't gonna see it! :o)
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Was the Author trying to say that while at his Sister's, he met another Female? If so, you're right. Lack of information is key.
As a potential writer, we need to remember that if we don't put/paint the picture we see, ito words, the Reader ain't gonna see it! :o)