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Dirty Little Whirlwind ([personal profile] naomi_jay) wrote2007-11-02 08:28 am
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Intermittent NaNo Progress Report #1

Total word count: 2,222

Reeking of awesomeness: They were disgusting creatures, the Revenants. Brutes, deserving of nothing but brutality. This one had been a pretty woman in life, I saw. Blonde hair fell across her chalk-white face, framing high cheekbones and pouty lips. Death hadn’t completely destroyed her looks, but it had sharpened them, honed then into something hard and cold.

Reeking of sucktitude: I shoved the corpse off of me and rose slowly, savouring the thrill of strength riding through me

Inadvertently misleading prose: I shoved the corpse off of me and rose. Not actually a reference to necrophilia.


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